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Well, that... can't be right.
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Doug: She's probably already listening. She has very good hearing.
Talita looks up from where she has pressed her face against the corner wall of her bedroom with a start. She is younger, with round glasses and large baggy black hoodie.
Both the humans around the coffee table and Talita in her bedroom are shown in an impossibly clean cross section of the entire building, which cuts through windows, walls, furniture, and objects with atomic precision, revealing their interior structure.
Next to the break room with Doug and the others is a reception area with a desk and mailboxes. It's decorated with a banner of colorful eggs and flowers, and a large paper wall art "reading "HAPPY FEASTER!" flanked by vegetables and a cartoon chabbit holding a broom.
On the floors above the break room and the lobby are the dormitories for foster teens, with hallways in the middle. Next to all the dormitory bedroom doors hang miniature decorated brooms, some doors with many more brooms than others. Each of the bedrooms is in a different state of disarray, all with multiple bunk beds and teenage residents who have decorated and arranged their belongings in unique ways.
Talita’s bedroom in contrast houses only her, with a large mattress on the floor and an electronics work desk in between her dressers. The ceiling light fixture is unscrewed, with its wiring split between the light and a cable running towards the work desk, seemingly as another source of power after all the wall outlets were occupied by splitters and extension cables. Her posters and decorations feature human celebrity heart throbs and aircraft. Wind spinners hang in front of her window.
Outside the cross section, even more impossible, is Earth's deep sea. The building appears to sit directly on the abyssal plain, its cut rooms open to the environment as if the surrounding water were just more air. Brittle stars and sea pigs crawl on the ground next to the floor of the lobby, while crinoids pop up outside the break room like flowers. A group of snail fish swim lazily around the bisected edge of the break room’s window, and far off in the distant dark waters, a bigfin squid drifts by.






147 thoughts on “Runaway to the Stars: Page 217 and 218”
pigeon
this page is so beautifullll im staring at it
narwhalsarefalling
THE HOLY LAPTOP NAILED TO THE WALL HAS APPEARED
halley
this page is gorgeous!! tysm i adore the cross-sections <3
lemonmeercat
stilt fish spotted!
I really like how bip is looking at her like ‘Don’t you want to choose your own path?’
Rey
THE LAPTOP NAILED TO THE WALL HAS APPEARED
gorsime
this might just be my favourite page in the comic. sooo much to look at. Where’s Talita would be too easy of a where’s Wally book, but finding bip in a bugferret terminal would be a hoot!
NTLS
you DID NOT have to do that much detail. and yet. my god. [i put up a protective ward against carpal tunnel]
OccidentalAvian
I just noticed that the cutaway goes straight through drawers and someone’s rollerbag, letting you see inside them! That attention to detail is so cool!
Gar G
Just noticed that one of the kids has a laptop nailed to the wall… Wonder how that happened
Origamigryphon
Considering all the Feaster brooms they have on their door, and their stressed posture over their desk, I’d wager to say they’re an overachiever and are on track for burnout, and that laptop was their first victim.
thegriffin88
Hi griffin friend! 👋
Origamigryphon
An 80’s baby, as well, hello!
cabbage
Taleenager
MrWho
Looks like someone has tampered with the ceiling lamp to power a soldering station, an oscilloscope and a number of other interesting electronic devices.
Llllove it!
HAL9000
*Once Upon a Time in Hollywood dicaprio whistle click meme* CONCORDE SPOTTED
Gar G
Saw the exit and now I have to wonder, is this connected to another building or is this just some sort of metaphor?
Vinemaple
Nexus Jovia is so big that they just have normal-ass buildings in a lot of areas, with sidewalks and tramways and stuff.
Bugs
I love the bigfin squid PNG in the corner lol
Gar G
Omg just noticed all the stuff she has plugged in
Hey her decorative things! 😀 and her plushies <3
Gar G
Omg just noticed all the stuff she has plugged in
Hey her decorative things! 😀 and her plushies <3
mossrabbit
the one kid with the five brooms above their door… i mean maybe some belong to their roommate, but seeing that plus the nailed-up laptop and the way theyre clearly stressing out over their desk… i think the majority of those brooms are theirs. not to psychoanalyze someone we see in the corner of a single panel, but i forsee a cataclysmic crash and burn when they hit college. godspeed kid, hope ya make it.
on to the actual comic, im actually obsessed with using the cross-sections of the walls as the panel gutters, meaning if you read the rooms in standard panel order, you reach doug’s dialogue at the same time talita does. but if you let yourself go right to doug, then you can follow his speech bubble to see talita up against the door. really really good. the details here are immaculate
Marcie
Instead of doing a bunch of extracurriculars to beef up their college applications, Jovian teens instead have amass a giant Feaster broom collection
Vinemaple
I assumed the brooms were the angsty studier’s absent roommate’s. And that they’re probably out getting more, right now
halley
oh, interesting. my interpretation is that the roommate is rly put together and organized (see how neat their half of the room is, with nothing loose on the desk and blankets folded atop the bed. there’s the… jewelry…? hanging from the rail of the bed, but even that is pretty neat, just in the open) and got all those brooms, and the kid we can see with the messy half of the room is struggling
also, i think i see a bi flag on the side of roomie’s cabinet!
Lilith
God, this is such an incredible comic. I’ve been loosely following the universe since before the comic started posting and I fell in love with it immediately. I think its is one of my favorite things i’ve ever read. This page is just so well drawn and packed with detail. Every room feels lived in, like it could be a room that actually exists.
MyUniverseinaBox
I LOVE the detail of the other teens here, and all the details in general. The kid throwing the roll of tape lmfaooo
JoB
> The kid throwing the roll of tape
Cue Talita texting them “cut it out, I’m trying to listen to someone else here” …
sugar-goat
Sad we can’t see Talita’s door to see how many brooms she has
I love everythign about this page! The teens, the nailed laptop, the cross-section of the building that cuts through people’s stuff too, the deep sea creatures… good soup
Sen
Mind blowing design. So much love in every detail. It’s like you have a detailed backstory for every single resident.
thoughtspeak
I love these big detailed 2-page spreads!! I’m obsessed with the implications of the laptop nailed to the wall in that one kid’s room. And I love all the details of Talita’s room–like how the light’s wonky because she probably took it apart and put it back together again!
Septemberdale
Is Talita exempt from Feaster service because she can’t eat Earth food, or does she have to help harvest food she cannot eat?
Jay Eaton
Feaster compulsory service involves much more than harvesting crops for rotation, that’s just one of the more glamorous tasks on the biosystems spring cleaning list. If Talita wanted to contribute to biosystems that she actively uses, she could join the laboratory clean out team, parks and green spaces team, or sewage and waste processing team. Younger children do not have compulsory service hours but are usually taken to a different biosystem team every year as a school trip, and are usually given some task that has an age-appropriate difficulty and cannot be catastrophically fucked up. This teaches them about the different systems of the station and impresses upon them the importance of contributing to station maintenance. Teens are usually given the option to pursue whichever spring cleaning tasks they are more interested in, but have to meet minimum hours and write a report as part of their school curriculum. Not meeting hours as a teen gets you a grade penalty instead of a civic penalty. Try-hards seeking extracurricular benefits will do more hours than is required.
flanneldragon
messy room w/ unsafe electronics… nerdy-ass fantasy and aircraft posters/figurines everywhere…. sulking in her bedroom listening in on her guardian… BIG BAGGY DYSPHORIA HOODIE….. how did you make talita so transgender. her eggy transfem Markéd-Lack-Of swag is driving me crazy
Zuorai
The eavesdropperrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
SecretWallDinosaur
Love her stipa caproni airplane model and what i think is a poster of an avian air city
TotallySomebody
WHO NAILED A LAPTOP TO THE WALL…..
SquirrelGoblin
OMG YES
WHO!?
MyUniverseinaBox
OH-
MonstieMunchies
CRINOIDS!!!!!! my beautiful and beloved crinoids and brittle stars!!!
Accursed Dirt Boar
I get the feeling this is symbolic in some way….
Enai
Who gave that poor kid in the top right room their unfortunate bowlcut. I hope to the stars it’s just one of the latest fashions, but man alive.
Also, I swear I saw that exact rug from the room the adults are conversing in in the 80s or early 90s somehere.
Phasma Felis
I looooove super detailed cutaways like this!
Also these are great rooms. So much space.
Enai
Yes, the detailed panoramas are great, even though Jay says they’re bored making them. I wonder if there’s a rat hidden here, too?
Enai
Hunted for the rat, found no rat. But the charging mats on the windowsill in the office are a nice touch 🙂
halley
aw, i think it’s cute
Siege
I have another interpretation to the underwater metaphor, and it’s how Talita is subconsciously viewing Mel. To people who have lived in space for generations and actually made contact with aliens… hmm, probably not as “alien” anymore to them as being in space is normal, but the deep sea is often described as an “alien landscape” and is likely still a little more mysterious to off-worlders. Mel is the focus of those deep sea visuals because they come from outside the foster home Talita grew up in; their voice is new and strange to her so that’s why when Mel speaks the focus of those visuals are on them. Everything outside of the building is alien (or alienating!) to Talita, and everything inside is normal because it’s the closest thing she’s ever had to a home. Mel coming in to foster her, despite it being a very good idea to keep a giant, orphaned, but still very young sophont off the streets, still represents someone from this alien world changing ALL of that.
Enai
I still think it’s Mel feeling lost, but maybe you’re right. Or maybe they both are feeling at sea here.
Vinemaple
Wow, that’s ALSO a convincing interpretation, right when I was swinging back to thinking it was about Mel, but this time about how Mel sees Talita as an alien more than a person… but your interpretation makes much better sense of the deep-sea environment being OUTSIDE the teen village… I think I’m gonna invest in this!
EEF PATTIES CHICKEN
Is that a teen Talita in a hoodie!?
bonescaro
yes! i always love seeing Talita’s fashion choices, and how “human” clothing is altered to fit her size and shape. also i remember a post from jays tumblr talking about how teen talita wore a lot of oversized baggy clothes to combat her body dysmorphia, which is at its peak right now 😢
Vinemaple
I like how it hangs over her hindquarters, I think that’s a more flattering cut on a Centaur than what Talita usually goes for, with the “waist” being under her excurrent nostril.
Chase Wanderstar
Appears so. Biggest hoodie I’ve ever seen!
Gar G
Aww. And my gosh that background!
And can only imagine how rough that must be for her at times, having to constantly hear everything that’s going on…
Fallingfeather
On one hand, for size reasons its probably a good idea that Talita has her own room. But on the other, I sure hope the other teens don’t give her crap for it. :C
HAL9000
it seems like the overcompensating wall-laptop kid also has their own room, so ehh maybe its not that uncommon? presumably if the facility isn’t at full capacity it’d be possible for some kids to get their own rooms
Vinemaple
Two beds in that room. I think the brooms are being earned by the conspicuously absent teen with the big jewelry collection
Phasma Felis
The cross section has me thinking about something I’d never considered before: building construction on a station like Nexus Jovia that’s big enough to have freestanding buildings. It occurs to me that walls and roofs are solely for privacy and soundproofing, not for keeping the weather out. (Maybe a *little* weather, since I think Nexus Jovia has scheduled rains for the outdoor plants?) But if the “outside” temperature is fixed and comfortable, there’s no need for thermal insulation, and you might even prefer *more* thermal to help cool rooms with lots of people/electronics.
Also, mass is a consideration. Not *as* much as on a moving ship, but bringing in building materials isn’t quite as simple as shipping them by truck. (Then again, with Jupiter’s rings to harvest, maybe it’s easier than you’d think.)
But still, sturdy walls have advantages in keeping loud noises outside, and preventing major structural damage from, say, teens nailing laptops to them.
thegriffin88
1: why are we under the sea? That’s one of my recurring stress dreams hooray 😵💫
2: I like reading your transcripts because it kinda tells me who you are as a person. Like your need to describe what a cross section is in the most detailed way as though making a wish to a very literal genie who will take any loophole to screw you over.
My scripts only make sense to me. Heh.
Infanteater
Talitas otter and quailicorn plushie return!!!
hessian
oh…the broken rooflight. environmental storytelling :[
Thundarrow
I don’t think it’s broken, it looks like Talita has been doing some tinkering with the cables for her stuff on the table
DasGanon
Yeah that looks like the “Questionably safe” decision of using the light as another power source for a bunch of other things. (No idea if Nexus Jovia is set up this way, but it’s semi-code/just good practice to have lights on one circuit and your outlets on another one so that if you pop the breaker you’re not in the dark)
Vinemaple
I think an 18-year-old who built a mechanical bank when she was only 10 can learn to divert power from a lamp socket safely… it looks permanent enough to convince me that Otilia et al are allowing her to keep it.
Generally, the fire risk is from doing this kind of thing badly, and Humans are notorious for not being aware of their own incompetence…
Hydrurgus
Nice Neocrinus, and…..LOLLIPOP CATSHARK?!!!!!!
Jay Eaton
Yep :}
Mushrealm
SEA *clap* PIGS! *clap*
S0glet
Snail fish… yay…. Even better: 3 snail fish…..yaay..
S0glet
Actually nvm…. 4 SNAILFISH
osprey
I love how teen Talita has posters of a cute fairy (butterfly?) woman + various aircraft. two great interests to have
Commander Ledi
talita’s lamp situation distracted me for a moment from her power cord situation.
Lezzlebit
Looking at this some more, I’m glad nobody’s standing on the edge of the cross section… Would be quite scary to see someone sliced in half
Peter Jensen
For an example of how that would look (though with bug ferrets):
https://jayeaton.site/RunawayToTheStars/Sophonts/BugFerrets/bugferrethouse.png
Enai
That’s disturbing. I thought it would be cool, but I’m unsettled now.